Friendships can be very meaningful and special, but also very complicated. What are the qualities of a great friend? What are some things that can weaken a close relationship over time?
Friendship is necessary and is essential for our life. Good friends are understanding, helpful, and are always available to share problems. However, this beautiful relation can face complications due to misunderstanding, distance, and lack of concern.
People will be there to enjoy during your happy moments, but only good friend remains in sad times. When someone is depressed during an illness, perhaps a family member's death, or a breakup, an understanding friend is there to console. He will always stop you from doing bad things. As an example, if a person is involved in drugs, drinking excessive alcohol, or eve-teasing, a friend will stop him by telling the side-affects. Honesty is one of the qualities of a real friend. He will be honest in giving reviews without thinking whether you are comfortable or not. A healthy friendship is a boon. Friends know how to make each other laugh, are aware of each other's hobbies, and are comfortable in sharing their belongings. A great moment with friends can be as little as a conversation over coffee.
However, with time and distance, sometimes close friendship gets weaken. Due to our busy lifestyle, it becomes difficult to talk to friends. People working in corporate jobs from 9 to 6 are very busy. Getting up early in the morning, meeting deadlines, and traveling back home takes most of their time. With time, priorities also change for a person. Sometimes we are so involved in other relations that we cannot give time to our friends. Without time even great friendship can fade.
Nevertheless, if we meet our old friends after a long time, also all the flashbacks come up. Great friendship with a deep connection can withstand various challenges.
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Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...is essential for our life. Good friends are understanding, helpful, and are always available to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07746478873 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93173293876 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4906215833 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6666666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5238095238 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90476190476 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24781305926 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709837109128 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643378848191 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140533556057 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388423338933 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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