Majority of the population are struggle to consume a healthy food. Cheap price and quick solution to eat unhealthy food are easy and convenient to consume. Therefore, we should educate people and make some regulation to restrict a business with unhealthy food.
Our lifestyle is getting busier, most of us simply do not have a free time to cook on a daily basis. Hence, we are consuming more food from restaurants and fast food. For many of us quik food solution is very comfortable, it's safe time it's easy to buy chains with fast food and snacks are everywhere. Moreover, it is also affordable for everyone.
Usually, advertising of unhealthy food looks amazing. It could includes super heroes and hold a message that fast food makes you stronger and more desirable for beautiful woman. So, people could not stand it and become addicted to this food.
Moreover, there is a lack of healthy diet education and old fashioned culture that passes from previous generations teach us to eat more meat and less vegetables in general. Cultural aspect has a huge influence on eating habits.
Some of the solutions could be an applying restriction and regulation on restaurants
with unhealthy food and advertising. Also we should force them to include in their menus a healthy meals. We can also ban ads for this kind of food. For example it was a big success after a cigarette campaigns were ban.
In conclusion, this is a complicated problem because sometimes we consume unhealthy food because of our cultural background or lack of time. But we should rise a public awareness by educating and popularising a healthy concepts among us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'include'
Suggestion: include
... unhealthy food looks amazing. It could includes super heroes and hold a message that fa...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun vegetables is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nerations teach us to eat more meat and less vegetables in general. Cultural aspect ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...has a huge influence on eating habits. Some of the solutions could be an applying restrict...
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Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s with unhealthy food and advertising. Also we should force them to include in thei...
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Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'meal'?
Suggestion: meal
...hem to include in their menus a healthy meals. We can also ban ads for this kind of f...
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Line 6, column 211, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...big success after a cigarette campaigns were ban. In conclusion, this is a complica...
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Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'banned'.
Suggestion: banned
...uccess after a cigarette campaigns were ban. In conclusion, this is a complicated ...
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Line 7, column 219, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'concept'?
Suggestion: concept
...by educating and popularising a healthy concepts among us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74509549094 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1190162288 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5555555556 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114117953119 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382603960471 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390866293087 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620285127231 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238728783546 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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