Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Cigarettes are unhealthy to smokers and to other surrenders. That's why this habit better be restricted in non private areas. I totally agree with the statement. If we take an active position, I believe that one day the human population will get rid of smoking forever.
In my opinion the entertainment like Hollywood films and advertising of tobacco companies create a strong image of macho and legitimate smoking among people. Fortunately these days are over. Today our awareness has risen and we build a healthier lifestyle. Many countries already banned smoking in public places because of health issues. So I hope the enlightenment of the damage that is caused by smoking will soon spread all over the word and it will be banned.
However we could not just ban smoking. We should encourage people to support new rules we should help, especially to smokers to smoke less and to quit. For instance, with the spread of anti smoking social advertising people will understand and follow new rules instead of dismissing them. Because the whole point in this issue is to reach and change people’s minds.
In conclusion, me and all health evidence and researches are against smoking in public. But to make a new rule more efficient we should reteach current smokers and to teach a younger generation about benefits that they could have in smoking free public places. In addition, destroy the cool image of a smoker and create a cool image of a non smoker.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Cigarettes are unhealthy to smokers and ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...thy to smokers and to other surrenders. Thats why this habit better be restricted in ...
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Message: Did you mean 'all over the world' (=globally)?
Suggestion: all over the world
...t is caused by smoking will soon spread all over the word and it will be banned. However we co...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...over the word and it will be banned. However we could not just ban smoking. We shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93927125506 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63510197065 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627530364372 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0254779832 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229263550982 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677780569389 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537664006841 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134737934058 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271288994964 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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