Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet .
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
Healthy diet is a habit in which people face difficulties now a days , I believe that Busy corporate culture and availability of junk food are the main reasons for people facing difficulties in maintaining healthy diet.
As the world is busy with the work they do , they are not able to dedicate time to have healthy food . People often spend most of the time in meetings and all their other office stuff and neglect food , which leads to headaches and also people loose conciousness due to that. If we talk about children , they are totally involved in their games and donot concentrate on food.
Junk food is also a main cause as people tend to have it and increase lot of fat contents in their bodies , I feel that due to high availability people are getting attracted towards junk food and consuming a lot of calories.
To maintain healthy diet , people must give some time specifically for food in between office hours , only then they can be healthy and can main high energy.
If it is about children , it is responsibility of parents to make sure children are having good food on daily basis. They must also stop eating junk food and start taking protien rich food like boiled eggs , milk etc , this let the one get a lot of energy with out increasing any fat in our body.
Maintaining a healthy diet in this busy life can be achieved only by giving particular time only for food , preferring protien rich food and food with minimum fat content is appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63846153846 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51319775468 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534615384615 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.429997652 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204628109177 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930980040818 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751685110472 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126282178646 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698312565541 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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