Many people have difficulty maintaining a healthy diet.
What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?
While people tend to have long lives and its average is more than 80 years old for both men and women in these days, yet, one of the most frequent cause of death in developed countries is the life style related diseases. To prevent high blood pressure, obesity and diabetes, having a healthy diet is critical. Although many people understand its importance, eating a balanced dish is not an easy for most people because people are too busy to cook homemade meal and often eat at restaurants or buy convenient snacks at stores. Vegetable smoothy is getting high attention from young people as a easy solution to improve their nutrition balance.
Firstly, especially in developed countries, having dinner at restaurant is very common nowadays, whereas in the past, eating outside was too expensive, so people went out for dinner only for special occasions. Now, people's lives become richer than the past and variety of restaurants offer delicious meals in reasonable prices. Therefore, many people experienced at least once in their lives that ordered too much dishes and ate more than their capacity. Also, science proved that a lot of sugar and salut are contained the food majority of the people think is delicious, so many restaurants offer meals used sugar and salut more than necessary to satisfy their customers. Thus, as people eat at restaurant more often, people would struggle to maintain a healthy diet. Similarly, economic development in many countries made people too busy to make their lunch at home, instead many workers buy snacks for their lunch at convenience stores. Such food contains artificial additives and such chemicals are not good for their body in many cases. Thus, in these days, people eat both lunch and dinner outside and this makes difficult for people to keep a well balanced food habit.
To improve their diet, many people introduce vegetable smoothy juice as breakfast. This was widespread because famous actors and models shared photos of the smoothy as their morning routine by instagram. Now, it is popular method among young generation as a convenient way of supplement vitamins. A study showed that having vegetable as a first meal of a day acts as a suppressor of blood sugar balloon for the rest of the day, so it is effective for improving people's health in variety of ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 593, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing high attention from young people as a easy solution to improve their nutritio...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...st once in their lives that ordered too much dishes and ate more than their capacity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, at least, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53411204989 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530927835052 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3568515696 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189831001006 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738612348463 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502899896014 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138153707499 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236500281908 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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