In recent years, the citizens always feeling unsafe whether they are at interior home or not. In my opinion, there are plenty of reasons for this issue. However, I strongly believe that we could take some measures to solve this problem.
There are numerous reasons why people do not feel safe even when they are at their own home. First and foremost, the level of crimes is increasing at alarming rates. In fact, there is too much news about crimes, sexual assaults, or road accidents. Hence, the citizens, who see and listen to these updated news every day, feel insecure and have a fear of crime among the public. Secondly, frequent occurrence of natural disasters such as an earthquake or violent storms. There is no doubt that the disasters destroy tons of blocks that could be dangerous for the families living here. Take Japan as an example, the people in this island country has to face misfortune earthquakes or tsunamis in their daily life.
Nevertheless, our safety can be made sure by some practical solutions. The mass media should reduce the amount of violence in newspapers, social networks, and TVs, which might prevent the insecurity feeling to citizens . In addition, The government must develop new technologies that can help minimize the damages caused by natural disasters. Moreover, more surveillance cameras should be installed, because if the public know that such cameras were in
place, they will think that they are being protected and have personal safety.
In conclusion, the increasing of crimes and disasters may be the main reasons that lead to the unsafe feeling from community. Despite that, I believe that there is always a right way to solve this serious issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02120141343 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52353286317 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0084624566 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217044520268 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643352430254 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919071465332 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108771742415 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679433990092 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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