The bar graph shows how weekly earning was used by families in a country in the years of 1968 and 2018.
Overall, it is clear that spending for food was the highest proportion of all. It is also noticeable that household goods was balance using in both 1968 and 2018 years.
Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that in the fields of food, fuel and power, clothing and footware, personal goods, which was reducing, while the others was increasing in two years. Noticably, fuel and power, personal goods was always the lowest of all time, just was about nearly 7 percent in 1968 and less than 5% in 2018.
In addition, the only field which was on balance throughout two years was household goods.
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