In this day and age, the amount of time people spend staying on their phones is rapidly increasing. From my perspective, I think there are many reasons for this. Although many people are still arguing whether this is beneficial or not, I believe that phones and technology is an outbreak advancement.
There are a number of reason why people likes using their phones. One widely held view that it keeps people entertained during their leisure time. Smartphones are useful recreational device since it has many purpose such as surfing the social medias, playing games and shopping online. Those can help people to relax after hard-working hours. Another possible reason for individuals to use their phones is to make full advantage of their work. Without a doubt, many busy employees have to spend their free time to finish their work. In detail, many of them can do the task on their mobile phones everywhere, such as on the way home or in a café shop, with all the technological features of the smartphone.
Due to the partly over-spending time on this high-tech device, many of the public considered this a negative development. Their opinion can be explained by the justification of health problems caused by the habit of phone-addicting. Namely eye defects like short-sightedness or eye straining, even our skin is badly affected by the green light from the screen of the electronic devices. However, this should not be blamed on technology because we are the one who can control our daily habit.
On the positive side, smartphones and technology are useful for individuals’ life nowadays. We can do many things on just this one small device, for example, paying household payments or set up a whole plan for our work. One significant advantage is phones keep their owners up-to-date by notifying information daily. Moreover, this gadget can connect people even from far away, for instance, a family that do not live together can talk to each other everyday through their phones.
To sum up, smartphones are excellent invention that bring many advantage to our daily life, that is the reason why people tend to spend more time on their phone. Although it does have several drawbacks, we should use it wise to make best use of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun purpose seems to be countable; consider using: 'many purposes'.
Suggestion: many purposes
...useful recreational device since it has many purpose such as surfing the social medias, play...
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Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'Those cans'?
Suggestion: This can; Those cans
...ias, playing games and shopping online. Those can help people to relax after hard-working...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Namely,
...caused by the habit of phone-addicting. Namely eye defects like short-sightedness or e...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...ones are excellent invention that bring many advantage to our daily life, that is the reason w...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wises'?
Suggestion: wises
...ave several drawbacks, we should use it wise to make best use of it.
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...ral drawbacks, we should use it wise to make best use of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94960212202 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77482488313 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557029177719 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1149160925 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.85 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363899412264 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113443704974 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729965596799 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204896469386 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533628424074 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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