Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone.
What do you think are the reasons for this?
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years, with the advancement of technology, society has witnessed an exponential increase in the ubiquity of people using smartphones. As a result, many individuals turn to these types of technological gadgets as a medium of recreation. Although this could prospectively derive people from stressing themselves out temporarily, several problems may be lurking beneath this notion. In this essay, the reasons leading to this situation will be elucidated before giving any further conclusion.
To begin with, a major factor contributing to the escalating use of mobile phones is social media. Constantly updating news on an hourly basis and sending notifications to their users, these social media can stimulate the FOMO or 'Fear Of Missing Out' syndrome better than newspapers or other traditional information-delivering methods, which can have a profound impact on how people using their phones for relaxation. With engaging interfaces and user-friendly functions, it is a high possibility that people may constantly scroll through their feed to keep themselves well-informed.
Another reason for this could be courtesy of the general rules of an organization or company. In many situations, especially at workplaces, employees are only allowed to use their phones for personal use during break time. By virtue of this, the general physical and mental well-being of people might be affected on a large scale. Sleep deprivation or the inability to concentrate are some of the problems resulting from the aforementioned situation.
To recapitulate, as the world is increasingly provided with the latest technological inventions, more avocational time has been spent on utilizing these gadgets to get day-to-day news as well as catching up with one's relatives and family. Notwithstanding the benefits it brings, in my opinion, the drawbacks of this development outweigh the upsides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61188811189 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36288209562 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3038935214 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.461538462 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200216832883 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684252320143 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454421271659 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116030893148 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489298347085 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.52 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.