Many people prefer to spend money and not save it
What are the reasons ?
Is it a positive or negative development?
Most people merely do not save money since they may enjoy expenditure rather than scrimping it. I consider that people cannot be able to control their shopping addictions and get motivation from expending the money for their objectives.
The majority of people earn money in order to spend on their interests and aims. Firstly, those who love fashionable clothes mainly spend money on buying them. In Uzbekistan, for instance, many people especially women purchase expensive and fashionable outfits but they may do not think about their financial conditions. Secondly, people who like expenditure, they can be motivated by it. To illustrate it, when they spend their budgets, they could have a willing to do it again and then they might work hard due to spend money more and more. By this way, those people feel happy and become in a decent mood. Therefore, people simply do not keep their money.
Unfortunately, not saving money could result in unpleasant situations. First of all, people who spend their finance everyday can face disease like influenza, in this case, they cannot get rid of it because of lack of money. Second of all, they would have unexpected occasions such as party, birthday or meeting and they need to get some presents in order to go to birthday or party. As a result, they can be in troubles. For these reasons, people should keep their money for dark days and they might never encounter those issues.
By way of conclusion, there are plenty of negative sides of not saving money. Therefore, people ought to save some money for any kind of situations. Otherwise, they are likely to have many problems related to money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... of all, people who spend their finance everyday can face disease like influenza, in thi...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce disease like influenza, in this case, they cannot get rid of it because of lac...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92831541219 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51898152394 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0013840591 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8823529412 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4117647059 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.17647058824 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24134724201 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100027629956 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559079106731 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180968289868 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619733811789 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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