Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?
More and more people prefer to watch foreign films in domestic films. This phenomenon is not new, caused by carrying new effects to oversea movies while local movies are lack of professional and outstanding plots. To make improvements in local film industries, the government should invest more in the financial aspect so far.
A reasonable explanation of why foreign films are more interested world-wide than locally produced films should discuss on both sides. By bringing a new effect on the image, some scenes in action movies, horror movies, even animated films make it more likely. The 3D film is a specific example, which makes the audience sense the whole story as a witness. Besides, the acoustic effect makes an important contribution to raising the feelings by adding songs at romantic scenes, or thrill sounds, whisper voice in horror movies. About domestic films, the effects are quite better now, however, the biggest problem is poor ideas, which makes the audience bored. Simple plots and scripts mostly about family and love topic, the misunderstand and contradiction between mother and daughter-in-law, the solution is unconvincing and the ending is not satisfactory.
To make big changes in domestic film industries, the effort should be made properly by investing more on the financial issue. The government should take into account on writer selection and appreciate the plot quality. In addition, we also allow students to study abroad to experience new techniques.
Watching foreign movies has become a new trend in our daily life because we are appealed by the new effects and we are too exhausted with old stories told in domestic movies. The improvement in quality should be considered by support from financial issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 720, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...pts mostly about family and love topic, the misunderstand and contradiction between mother and da...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24285714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77119844405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0168191227 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343516810938 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124079019102 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132688948452 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204968262998 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998944071283 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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