Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measures can be done to address those problems?
In recent decades, the economic inequality has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although it has many serious consequences, they are not without solutions.
There are a number of problems caused by wealth inequality. If the gap continues for a long time, class distinctions will be formed. For example, in developing countries, there are many restaurants that are open only for the elite and the poor are not allowed to enter because the owners are afraid of polluting the air. Beside that, the rich will both hold political power and they have the right to take the lands, money,... of the poor. While the poor who make efforts to have achievements, rich people can buy degrees and leadership with just money.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, to address class discrimination, we should educate everyone about equal rights. For example, bringing lessons about equality in every lesson for students is a reasonable choice. Last but not least, in order for the rich not to have all the leadership, the government needs to encourage the poor and create conditions for them. Making opportunities for the poor not only helps them stay motivated but also narrows the gap between wealth and poverty.
In conclusion, while wealth inequality can cause a great number of issues, there are many helpful solutions. It is predicted that more and more countries will be forced to take such measures to avoid the problem that has been raised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... have the right to take the lands, money,... of the poor. While the poor who make ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n wealth and poverty. In conclusion, while wealth inequality can cause a grea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10236220472 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66202294745 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0780415749 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206555450733 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699305863151 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573169447934 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932909271543 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635548290647 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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