Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There can be no doubt that the topic of globalisation is one which deserves some analysis. It is the opinion of this writer that completely advocates the idea that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment because globalisation can pose a serious threat on natural resources and using modern machinery can affect the environment.
Globalisation can pose a serious threat on natural resources. Government must modernize and expand the land for their nation to develop, which will endanger the environment. To illustrate, governments must cut down forests to modernize their countries and this will deprive the animals of their habitat. This is because the governments of countries desire their countries to be able to develop so as not to fall behind with the times. As a result, most of the government has to deforestate. Thus, globalisation can pose a serious threat to natural resources.
Using modern machinery can affect the environment. Modern machines when operating can emit gasses that are harmful to the environment. For instance, the use of regular hole appliances such as air conditioners and refrigerators are a prime source of carbon monoxide which is highly poisonous to the atmosphere. This is because if the machinery is more modern, the environment will be more polluted because of the waste generated by the machine. Therefore, using modern machinery can affect the environment.
It can be seen that globalization can pose a serious threat on natural resources and using modern machinery can affect the environment. To conclude, this writer agrees with the idea that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38628158845 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1640493483 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425992779783 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7023302774 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130340543516 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535307675802 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109037126552 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118647651041 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101403557315 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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