For the time being, the advanted technology has affected our learning ,working and socializing way. One cannot image living without smartphones and other gadgets in this innovative era. It appears to me that children nowadays are getting addicted to these electronic devices and they need to be convinced to take part in other outdoor physical activities. I completely agree with this view and in this following essay will show you two reasons for my opinion.
Undoubtedly, it is said that outdoor activities have a positive impact on children's physical and mental health. Sitting in front of screens for a long time can lead to the lack of movements, obesity or even short-sightness. As a result of it, youngsters need to cut back on time wasted on electronic entertainment offers them chances to sit for outdoor movements. According to reliable surveys, teenagers who participate in sports games have their stamina and muscles enhanced and grow up healthily.
In thr second place, games in real life with real friends are believed to boost practical knowledge of a child. Mnay kids nowadays overuse computers and online entertainment as they stay indoor all day that causes laziness and no interest in their real community. Moreover, they prevent them from build up such skills as social skills, problem-solving skills,etc. Besides, young generation should take actions from now to maintain our beauty of traditinal games which have been fading away from our innovative life.
Overall, children easy to access mobiles as well they easy to be addicted to them. Personally, as long as kids have ability to control their computer-using habit effectively and get involved to outdoor sports more, thier life will be improved actively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, second, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24014336918 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87128766469 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652329749104 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4171728764 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190101376867 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555962223666 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046574623075 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107248963216 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330260448861 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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