Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
For the time being, coming along with the developing modern world, it is argued that the role of teachers is gradually fading away in light of robots and Artificial Intelligence, while others still claim their essential component in this academic studying era. From my point of view, I agree with the statement of teachers' significance in education due to specific reasons analyzed in these following paragraphs which are educators' being ideal models and guider in students' life.
To commence with, it is undeniable that schoolteachers are the second greatest models of the children only after their parents. Lectures are those who realize the magnitude of education, accompany students along the learning process so that they can be able to understand learners' deficiencies and set appropriate approaches for each students' learning style as well. Schoolteachers also can become a good listener and advisor of a child when lending a sympathetic ear to their students like parents and then work out for suitable solutions in such difficult situations. Moreover, well-qualified educators always inspire and motivate their pupils to reach full potential since studying at school. As a result, these enthusiastic guiders assist students to set their own goals to achieve, overcoming making responsible choice in life.
Secondly, teachers play a vital role in leading young generations to become good citizens. It is undoubted to say that trainers are such previous pioneers that they have experiences and observations. As educators can simplify complex lessons and convey academic contents, the trainees will be able to acquire necessary knowledge without numerous barriers or struggle. Not only understandings in books, tutors also provide the youth invaluable lessons about morality, honesty which are needed for life. Consequently, learners will be able to apply their precious knowledge and skills getting from their leaders into practice.
Besides, the more advanced technology become, the more Artificial Intelligence comes into existence. Although the AI are programmed with perfect accuracy, make less error than human beings or store up a great deal of information, they are still products of human. Therefore, people had better take advantage of both assistance of skillful educators and AI in education order to develop fully in every field.
In conclusion, despite the advance of technology in this day and age, the saying that teachers have a crucial influence in curriculum is completely persuasive due to various reasons which are their personality, inspiring-effects and educational quality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56783919598 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98702191855 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.871374588 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148496267794 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446572865976 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569675562464 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901103896962 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674490717095 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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