For the time being,it is undeniable that the academic standard can not be develped withouy the role of teachers. In this essay, I totally agree that teachers make a vital contribution to national edication.This essay will show that not only are teachers effective educators but they also believable motivators.
Firstly, all tutors are experienced people.Through well-structured lessons with explainations and academic demonstrations, students have opportunities to acquire necessary knowlegde to provide them a deeper insight into an abundance of horizon.The most principal example of it may be that some basic life skills teached at school will assist kids to solve the issues about learning or relationships.
Secondly, children need sympathic motivators to support them along the long anf tense process of learning because they easily get bored and drained.Teachers will inspire and motivate pupils to reach their full potential.For instance, children often have troubles in family or friend problems so that emotional support is essential.
In conclusion,there is no denying that the education industry can be enhanced thanks to the efforts of teachers,who are thought to be great tutors and significant motivators for teenagers.
- It is very important that children should study hard at school Time spent studying on the Internet is time wasted Do you agree or disagree You should write at least 250 words 56
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors Do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 56
- Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay 56
- Nowadays tourism has developed and contributed a significant portion of national income to its own country Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72826086957 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35325646536 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.722826086957 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.262361377 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.8 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101220856278 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546227898119 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608921026441 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569534139887 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603829461805 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 13.0946893788 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.6 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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