Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education Do you agree or disagree

For the time being, coming along with the modernization of out life, it has been a common belief that teachers make an instrumental contribution to the quality of education. In my judgement, I firmly agree with this viewpoint due to specific reasons. These could include their educational lessons and the motivation they offer.

First of all, teachers are effective educators who simplify complicated subjects and abstract concepts. As a consequence, students can acquire the necessary knowledge without much struggle. For example, they not only instruct students in befitting methods of learning but also teach them how to use and apply knowledge in practice. Apparently, lectures enable pupils to push the limits of their potential and greatly enhance their academic achievements.

Last but not least, teachers obtain students the impulse and encouragement. As we have seen, the process of studying at school is a long and tense one, which likely makes students drained and bored. Hence, they are required to be motivated and relieve a great deal of pressure. Observing them closely, schoolteachers can identify such signs of demotivation. What is more, they always congratulate their students on their achievements, lend a sympathetic ear when they have troubles,... For instance, they are able to understand learners' deficiencies and find ways to help them overcome them.

To sum up, it is undeniable that teachers play a significant role in education on account of educating students to become good citizens and approaching them in times of emotional hardship.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05306668121 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681632653061 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.571715432 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109395885977 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353421549117 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511397575436 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836967408047 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645124787742 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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