Many people suppose that teachers play an important role in education. Do you agree or disagree?
It is alleged that teachers are of vital significance in the sphere of education. In my judgement, I completely agree with this viewpoint and reckon that the presence of teachers in classrooms is indispensable, regarding their being effective educators and motivators.
To start with, students' success at school is subject to their teachers' dedication. Simplifying complex matters and abstract concepts, they enable them to acquire necessary knowledge without much struggle. What is more, they are also instructed in befitting methods of learning and tactics to have good results, a few of which are, to exemplify, ways to remember lessons quickly or to manage time properly, etc. Apparently, were it not for the guidance of teachers, students would not be able to have in-depth understanding of school subjects, study efficiently and, therefore, greatly enhance their academic achievements.
Additionally, despite being deemed to be mere paid employees who provide knowledge by some people, teachers are indeed also a great source of motivation. It is an undeniable fact that the process of schooling is a lengthy and tense one. It follows that students are required to make great efforts and have strong determination. Hence, they are likely to get bored and weary. Teachers, who observe them closely, can identify such signs of demotivation and exert positive influences on their mentality. They try to instil into them strength and drive by telling inspiring stories of successful people or reminding them of their goals. They then realize that their only option is to persist with their work and embrace challenges that they might encounter, which leads them to achieve their dreams.
To conclude, I hold the belief that the roles teachers play in education is irreplaceable in view of their ability to better their students' performance at school and to inspire them in times of emotional hardship.
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- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33443708609 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91193679611 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8166350573 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0939377737047 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033254305735 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416656449324 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769239000341 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508177075139 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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