many people think that the activities of multinational corporations benefit the economy of the developing countries, but others think those multinationals are harmful.
to what extent do you agree?
It is commonly argued that the actions of the companies which are multinational mostly help the economy of developing nations, while others believed that these companies have negative impacts. From my point of view, I strongly believe that the benefits multinational corporations give a nation outweigh the drawbacks.
A growing body of research suggests that multinational corporations have a generally positive effect on developing countries' economies. One key benefit is that international investments pour into these nations and create job opportunities for a wide range of workers. This can lead to an increase in wages. Take Turkey as an example, a recent report said that the average wages have risen 15 percent compared to 5 years ago. While wage growth is one indicator of economic health, it is clear that international companies can contribute to a country's development.
However, there are also negative effects that must be considered. One important issue is that multinational companies can take customers from local businesses. This means that local businesses are likely to close down. For instance, global chains such as McDonald's and Coca-Cola have a much larger budget for advertising, allowing them to increase their market share at the expense of local restaurants. Although competition is often seen as a key driver of economic growth, it can be argued that these large companies have an unfair advantage over small businesses, which can lead to the formation of monopolies.
In conclusion, it is deniable that multinational corporations have both positive and negative impacts on developing countries. In my opinion, I totally agree that these companies are much more beneficial. I highly recommend governments of developing nations should set up legislation to ensure fair competition between multinational companies and local businesses.
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| 2022-05-02 | Mary Nhuy Tran | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52447552448 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15646550555 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6168695002 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149499811658 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538992512743 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591129305712 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109001041144 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589755935842 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.