You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Many people argue that urban citizens are the victims of numerous social issues due to overpopulation. so the resolution is to evacuate them to rural areas. From my point of view, this is a possible and potential plan, which I will discuss the reasons in the following essay.
There are two major reasons why the government should take this plan, which are over employment and over transportation. There is a fact that most people think their earning money might be getting more and consequently, their living conditions would be improved a lot in metropolitans. However, the truth is the reverse. Because there are too many immigrants over flooding into big cities, they are overwhelmed and it poses a shortage of employment for a large number of workers. As a result, their lives are getting worse. On the other hand, the number of vehicles is also a huge problem in metropolitan cities, especially during rush hour. Moreover, having numerous vehicles on the roads means having a large number of toxic emissions which result in producing methane, the main cause of the greenhouse effect.
However, moving citizens should not be the only project the government could conduct. Instead of evacuating a big number of population to regional towns, they should spend more on infrastructure, including transport, water conservation, and renovation of old neighborhoods. In addition, there should be a tax imposed on gas emissions, which could lead to reduced air pollution and improve the living environment.
In conclusion, easing the urban population is an acceptable solution but not enough, the government should take responsibility for more likely plans.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
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Line 2, column 453, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...rous vehicles on the roads means having a large number of toxic emissions which result in produci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, moreover, so, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23308270677 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00388878677 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8919731176 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4285714286 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212754392334 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602464664301 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339555217045 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112557446453 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313830769867 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.