Many people think the fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?
In this day and age, the debate on the advertising of processed food corporations has received substantial public attention. Some reckon that these firms ought to be permitted to show the advertisements whilst some individuals are of the reverse opinion. From my perspective, advertising junk food ought to be barred due to the following reasons.
To commence with, prohibiting fast food companies to exhibit promotions is a plausible remedy for citizens to ensure proper health. A prime instance is that in 2015, the Chilean government imposed a set of laws on enhancing the populace’s physical condition, including forbidding firms to advertise beverages and pre-made food. Consequently, the next five-year timeframe observed a considerable downturn from 63% to 40% in the proportion of the corpulent population. If it had not been for this action, the citizens would have been driven by these commercials to purchase and consume ready meals, which deteriorates their health.
Moreover, it is inessential that processed food corporations lavish a plethora of budget on the advertising industry, which can be invested in other respects in need. An annual report in 2020 of Kentucky Fried Chicken, an American fast food company, revealed that the expenditure on promotions was $10.000 per restaurant, doubling the amount of money spent on raw materials and ingredients. Had these advertising costs been utilized for ingredient expenses, the dishes would have been more reliable and appetizing, which might be favorable to consumers rather than marketing campaigns. Accordingly, junk food firms had better not be authorized to promote.
Given these aforementioned points, I hold a firm belief that prohibition on fast food promotions should be introduced in light of developing public health and owing to its waste of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, consequently, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46996466431 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12379482686 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618374558304 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4091484213 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229525275316 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794815260927 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403270551183 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13235912812 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028144226557 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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