Many people think that the Internet is useful to people many aspects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays people depend on the Internet more and more, so it may be harmful to them in some respects. However, I am not totally compelling to say that Internet is not useful in any aspects for following reasons.
To begin with, Internet is a mighty tool for education. It provides students with a variety of educational resources, academic lectures to help them learn more flexibly and control their time reasonably. Moreover, tutoring may sometimes be expensive, and in the distance, so students can study with the Internet in hope of reducing the costs of transport and tuition fees.
Secondly, Internet is convenient for payment. For instance, people do not have to carry cash when they go shopping because they can bear the cost via the Internet. On the other hand, many apps on the Internet can enable us pay their energy consumption, which makes us easier to manage our money and other financial data.
In addition, a lot of persons have desire to make friends with strangers, even foreign ones. Therefore, Internet has created various astonishing social platforms such as Facebook, Instagram to satisfy their expectation. As a result, people can get to know new companions through the Internet.
Finally, Internet helps us relax on our own. Since many fabulous videos were uploaded on YouTube every day, an individual can watch them to avoid being exhausted from overworking. Futhermore, teanagers can play online games in hope of decreasing study pressure.
In conclusion, notwithstanding better life, Internet might have negative effects if human manipulate it so bad. Therfore, we should use the Internet wisely to work more effectively, and feel more pleasant about life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79024239854 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6319852554 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18856436024 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577048395063 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419406982504 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935298275432 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458654497979 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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