Many people think that It is a good idea for teenagers to have jobs while they are still students while others believe that they had better focus on their study. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Nowadays, with the economic and social development, the number of students who take a part-time job while pursuing a degree is increasing steeply. While it is argued that this trend brings various benefits, others completely oppose this view. In this essay, I will deliberate both views before reaching a concrete decision.
On the one hand, students should take/do part-time jobs because they will give them more chances for their future careers. When students work part-time, they have to schedule their daily routine carefully to balance working and learning. As a result, their time management skills will be practiced and improved gradually. This becomes their advantage in the future when they are looking for a job because nowadays most companies prefer to employ those who have many practical skills.
On the other hand, students should focus on learning if they want to graduate on schedule or sooner. It can be seen that most students have to spend from six to eight hours per day in classes, which is just as tiring as a working adult’s full-time job. Therefore, if they spend at least four more hours working, they will feel seriously exhausted and find it difficult to complete their homework or learning effectively. Consequently, they may fail several subjects or even cannot graduate on time, which is likely to negatively affect their career path.
In conclusion, despite the advantage of taking part-time jobs, I believe that it brings more harm than good to the young generation. Therefore, students should only go to work on summer vacation if they want to gain more experience and should spend a larger part of the time on their academic careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, at least, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10545454545 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58523717281 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.905373446 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264993177289 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963479993047 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041853325795 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152422956407 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420956289526 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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