Success of person is often associated with the region a successful person comes from. While a lot of people perceive that region plays a significant role in building a general perception about someone from a region, others reject the notion and believe that a man is successful only because of his or her skills and region does not play a big role in his/her success. This essay will discuss how native region plays an important role in building a successful person and how does the success story shape the future generation of a region.
Firstly, a successful man brings a lot of name and fame to the town he has grown up and completed his education from. It builds a general perception about the people coming from a particular region as they are perceived to possess a particular quality or skill. For example, people from south east asia are usually considered good mathematicians and hardworking, similarly, the people from Jamaica are assumed to be good sprinters. Hence people carry their image based on which part of the world they come from.
Secondly, a successful story in a region inspires a lot of young people and motivate them to follow the footsteps of the successful personnel. The success story of such people are often narrated to the young generations. For example, everyone in Jamaica often talks about the success story of Usain Bolt and how he became the fastest athlete in the world.
In conclusion, the region of a successful person plays a significant role in defining the common traits of an individual from that region.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun name seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of names'.
Suggestion: a lot of names
...on. Firstly, a successful man brings a lot of name and fame to the town he has grown up an...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...maica are assumed to be good sprinters. Hence people carry their image based on which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88301886792 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68704683977 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498113207547 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6532268637 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328904597482 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146424815286 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972278645077 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221612757464 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905742361352 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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