Many people think that social networking sites are beneficial for the modern life while others believe that they bring human problems.
Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that social media platforms are advantageous while others think they are more harmful for mankind. I personally gravitate toward the idea that this does more good than harm.
First and foremost, according to some, social networks enhance the connections among people, I completely concur with this. That is because of their ability to help people connect and stay in touch. In the past, friend circle of each person just normally rotated around his village or city, however, in the modern society with various social networking sites, people easily strike up a friendship with different people in dissimilar countries through a phone. According to Washington post, the proportion of isolated elderly also declines dramatically due to social networks, which help them to keep in touch with their children regardless of geographical boundaries. Moreover, social media keeps people stay updated quickly. There is no need for newspapers every morning, with some social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter or Tik Tok, people have access to real-time news and information effortlessly.
On the other hand, skeptics of social media might argue that there are more problems triggered from it and cyber violence is one of the most common issues. A study of Melbourne University conducted that there are millions of people suffering from depression and other mental illnesses due to cyber violence. Hiding behind anonymous social networking accounts, people tend to be more irresponsible and keep saying toxic words without thinking about the consequences.
In conclusion, albeit some feasible drawbacks, I am convinced that social networks are still highly beneficial and play an indispensable role on modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73892797321 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664179104478 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6087939772 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.833333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263341015711 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923469020757 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777646825707 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154750222601 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307833210848 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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