You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.
Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and
Give your reason for writing
Tell about your education
Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Walker,
I am writing this for the application of the job of the Quality Assurance Manager poster on the university's notice board. My name is Riddham Patel and I have been a Master's student of our university for a year.
Firstly, I would like to elaborate my educational qualification. Currently, I am in the first year of MBA programme offered in our campus. So far in my ongoing course, I have done well in all the spheres of my curriculum, which can be inquired from my course co-ordinator Mr. Brown. Before my current course, I have completed my bachelor's with 'First class' degree from our university only.
Hiring me for the mentioned post will benefit to our campus by myriads of reasons. Since I am having a long relationship with our university, I have many connections with students as well as faculty members. This would make the communication required for the=is job much effective and fruitful. Additionally, due to my sound knowledge regarding the subject of Management, I shall be performing this job effectively. Hence, it is worth considering my candidature for this job.
I have attached my curriculum vitae with this letter. In the anticipation of the earliest response, I remain.
Yours Faithfully,
Riddham Patel
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04326923077 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08547114904 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3504122913 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9285714286 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8571428571 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177894148412 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660670627697 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798541101297 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123329133237 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104641072183 0.0580467560999 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.