The role of criminal activities are soaring in societies and communities these days throughout the world.it is always claimed that police patrolling play a vital role in dropping crime, although there are many other supportive measures that should be taken.
Regarding effectiveness of police patrols, evidence suggest that increase in police activities on the streets lead directly to drop in crime, ranging from violence and robbery. This is mainly due to presence of police around the societies. For instance, it was experience in New York city, after adopting policy in 1990s, crime rate decreased dramatically. Furthermore, it would also consider as the best way to protect and improve the woman safety and night specifically. Consequently, when compared to other tactics that have been tried, ranging from cctv to robot security technology, police patrolling is the most effective resources we have.
Turning to the possible and potential methods to reduce crime rate, the court should make strict law and issue the sentences, regardless of thief situations. This would help to deter people from committing crime in the first place. Secondly, we should increase the resources which would help police to detect and gain the information about the incident when crime do occur. Moreover ,individuals and businesses should also set up their own security arrangement. For instance improved lock system and lighting are simple measures which can reduce theft and burglary.
Overall, I feel that visible police postures have been proved to be the most effective way to reduce common crime. Their effectiveness can be maximized by supporting action from the police, justice system and private citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the 1990s
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Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46037735849 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7540604025 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9494418944 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.307692308 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244414196321 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763858394303 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059994776753 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141856896735 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665247569386 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.