Cybercrime has been known as an international issue. It causes inconveniences in different aspects of life, and preventing those requires additional effort.
The most important well-known problem that hackers can cause is hacking people's ID and bank accounts and stealing their money. For example, in 2019, a group of hackers were able to enter one American bank and get access to the ID's of more than 6 million people, which was a great shock to the country. Furthermore, not only do hackers steal regular people's ID's, but also they sometimes attack the intelligence services and security agencies and use their information to sell out to other countries or threaten the government. A very famous example of this case is WikiLeaks, which published thousands and thousands of private data about many countries, especially America.
Programmers and computer scientists are working hard to find the bugs and avoid these exploits, but the best solution must be to announce and educate people how to save their ID's and keep them safe in order to deny access to strangers. The other useful action, especially for organizations, is to be up-to-date and use strong antiviral software.
In conclusion, the main reason why people should be aware of internet theft is to prevent data from being stolen, and the best solution is public education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15137614679 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82853499501 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692660550459 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9513814293 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.777777778 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159487088781 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594163523208 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415101302619 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826419951714 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020064693917 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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