The amount of money which a professional athlete would make during his or her career, is a matter of debate. Whether they deserve the high sums of money or not, is going to be discussed in the following essay.
One the one hand, there are several reasons why high-ranked sports champions should be well-paid. First of all, becoming an athlete in olympic level needs a long period of hard practice. For example, Mohammad Ali who was a boxing legend, was trained more than a decade. Furthermore, being a sports hero needs more than long time effort. In addition to innate capabilities, an immense dedication and perseverence should be added to results in a world's champion and it is not every man's land, without any doubt. For example, a wrestling champion needs hours of training, education, practice and diet to be qualified to take part in olympic tournoment. Moreover, with regard to the relatively short career span, athletes do not have more than ten to fifteen years for making money out of their profession. Take a famous soccer player as an example, does not have more of a decade to flourish and gain financial benefit from football leagues. Consequently, this enormous salary could be justified.
On the other hand, I do believe that this tremendous discrepancy in the income between sports stars and other more important professions, is not fair at all. Firstly, in spite of gaining lower income, there are more important jobs for community compared to athletes like doctors, nurses and pilots who are responsible for our safety. I can not imagine that a top surgeon, for instance, earn one-tenth than a tennis champion. Also, some of these jobs need much more specific training, risk taking and talent rather than a sports star. Becoming a fighter jet pilot, as an example, takes more than a decade education and the same amount experience and training. Horrible risk percentage in addition to the maximum responsibility grade to defend a country's air space, makes it irrational to be paid less than a football player. So, these critical jobs should not be underpaid.
In conclusion, despite short career span and popularity of a ports star, other crucial professions like doctors, nurses, teacher and pilots should not be less paid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ore than a decade. Furthermore, being a sports hero needs more than long time effort. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7090661044 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590425531915 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3807326654 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147082653829 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477792907217 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370727640525 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857717342218 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042810852124 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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