Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits.
Discuss both view and state your own opinion.
Individuals have sparked off a heated controversy over the outcome brought about by hosting international sporting events. In my opinion, it should be encouraged despite a double-edged impact on the nation, which I will discuss below.
On the one hand, people support the events because of many benefits. Indeed, hosting a sporting tournament, states provide citizens with a chance to approach professional athletes. This fosters the passion for sport among youngsters, acting as a catalyst to contribute their sporting talent to the country. Moreover, while sedentary lifestyle is becoming a harmful trend recently, such tournaments play an important role in raising public interests in physical activities and health promotion. Moreover, the events also assure a persistent recognition and enhance host nations’ global figure. As a result, it is beneficial for tourism, foreign investment stimulation and diplomacy, like Vietnam in 2003, when the 22nd SEA games conveyed its prosperity and hospitality and marked the beginning of substantial economic growth later.
On the other hand, several reasons make people consider such events detrimental. Particularly, the requirement of infrastructure for the tournaments needs an enormous investment to fulfill. This may create a financial burden on host nations and, eventually, leave them economically exhausted. The problem may be exacerbated by the short-term use of these infrastructures, which bring about an inadequate outcome due to their redundancy. Second, although they are advantageous, sporting events are always less urgent priorities than others like environment or health care. Therefore, focusing on them may raise a question mark over the government’s ability to manage the budget, and cause social instability stemming from the harsh criticism of citizens.
Briefly, I believe that the government should organize sporting events because of their enormous benefit, although the drawbacks should not be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86254295533 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18647695868 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676975945017 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9009194411 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.733333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295202953686 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854501641088 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590337378306 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157005986089 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196651513956 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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