Many people work from home using modern technology today. Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not the employer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Working from home is the new trend. Some individuals believe that it is more beneficial to employees than employers. In my opinion, it benefits both. While employees benefit from convenience, employers get to keep the costs of running the business down when their staff work from their home.
Some people might argue that when employees work from home, it is difficult for their employers to assess their performance. The traditional practices such as walking around to ensure everyone is working is useless in this case. However, in my opinion, this is hardly an issue. When people work from home, they will have specific targets to accomplish. Honestly, there is no need for any employer to supervise them. As long as they deliver the projects on time, the employer has no reason to suspect their efficiency or loyalty. Another advantage for the employer is that they can keep costs down. When people work from their home, employers do not have to invest in costly office space or equipment. Also, they can save a lot of money on utility bills. Some companies allow their employees to use their own device. This is even more advantageous for the employer if there are no security concerns to worry about. Another specific advantage of this arrangement is that employers can now hire talent from any part of the world.
Employees also benefit. They get to work flexible hours. They can save time and money as they do not have to commute to work. Work from home is particularly beneficial for people who have young children to take care of. In fact, this option has enabled a lot of young women to start working again after having babies. Many of them would have to stay out of the workforce, if they had to travel to office every day.
In conclusion, working from home benefits both the employer and the employee. While employees benefit from flexible working hours, employers get to hire talent from all over the world and save money on office rentals and utility bills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, honestly, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82941176471 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43358138124 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488235294118 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3570912946 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4166666667 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318006513971 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103080041469 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824773057154 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220534394692 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383514599711 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.