The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The position of women in human society nowadays has changed significantly. Compared to the past, women are always considered as housekeepers or babysitters. Men, on the other hand, are expected to be more successful in the universal value. However, if we take a careful look on the matter, we may still see more problems deep down inside.
It is obvious that we can see more women appear to take place some higher position in many fields, most of them can even do a better job than the men. With higher educations and greater capabilities, they truly have more powers and had been influencing in this world. Examples like the first female president in Germany who has been leading her country well for many years, and some big tech companies like Yahoo and Trend Micro are also leaded by a female CEO. These all are the evidences of improvement of gender equality.
However, if we dive in to the water more deeply, we may see there are still some problems exist. Despite there has been a huge improvement in recent decades, we can still see the lack of equality in the society. For instance, women usually get paid less than men even though they have similar works. Furthermore, in terms of employment, some employers prefer to hire males other than females just because women can be pregnant. A lot of these are still happening, and it is clear that we should put more efforts on the matter.
To conclude, though the gender equality in the our society is now quite better than the past, there is still a long distance for us to achieve the goal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...conclude, though the gender equality in the our society is now quite better than the pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65818181818 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47837323345 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567272727273 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6666339613 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149355941243 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589771804468 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648189727893 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104992692242 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395237532093 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.