Many professionals such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions do you suggest to deal with this situation?
Nowadays we, the citizens are facing a problematic situation where the professional workers or high professionals like teachers, engineers, and doctors and so on were leaving their own country to pursue opportunities in developed countries and it’s in increasing trend and there should be a solution towards it.
Professionals do often travel to foreign or other countries for their post-graduation courses however do they don't have courses in their origin or those courses doesn't worth regarding their academics. These travelling professionals are one of the reason for the diminished growth of engineers, doctors and so on particularly in their own countries.
They step to the developed countries towards the opportunities and their reputation towards their research works and sometimes the pay also considered for their upgrade towards foreign. These problems will surely lead to insecurity of jobs, career and also in educations in the local arena but the best and one of the solutions towards this issue would be the government introducing of schemes regarding the higher education courses based on the professions for the empowerment of graduates, professional like doctors, teachers and so on and also to the poor people.
Government should initiate more courses or opportunities in some research works of their professionals in order to impede their efforts towards abroad there by providing prodigious vacancies or opportunities in their respective field or profession.
In concluding the suggestions to the problem/issue aroused, the measures should be taken by the government agencies or some third parties in order to eradicate the issues and unless these professionals aren't thinking about their people in their country, there won't be a complete result towards this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59124087591 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1323140206 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9802519071 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.857142857 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.1428571429 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246424624503 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12342013048 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329264342443 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142000266846 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335706926848 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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