There is no need to maintain a close relationship with distant relatives.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Since ancient times people have been actively moving in search of a better life for themselves and their families relations between close people became weaker. An opinion exists a frequent communications with distant cognates do not matter much. I completely disagree to the above mentioned point of view due to the reasons marked hereinafter.
First off all the connection between generation is important to transfer cultural and life experience. A child consumes new information not only from their parents but also from all the people who surround them. An offspring grows up in a rich cultural environment which improves their development. For example my neighbor Artem Zaytcev spent every summer in the countryside with his grandmother who provided him with a lot of books. Hence, intercourse with different people from the family helps the infant grow more versatile and intelligent.
What is more I am convinced that the caring of all the family members is needed. If a man is lonely, only a close person or relative can take care of them. This is especially true for older people, since they often experience difficulties that cannot be solved on their own. According to an article in the journal «Medicine in Voronezh», 50% of people over 75 are vulnerable in society. Thus, a human should remember their relatives and hope that they also receive the help that they may need in an older age.
To conclude, I am all for the idea that children need to communicate with all their relatives in order to fully develop. Moreover, a person will grow old someday and may need any help which can be given not only by close people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'communication'?
Suggestion: communication
...me weaker. An opinion exists a frequent communications with distant cognates do not matter muc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9347826087 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70637380035 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.378078076 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181842533453 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055941932407 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532719785406 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114675884496 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360778601066 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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