When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent decades, many countries have engaged in the advancement of their technological levels to compete with their neighbors. In this sense, an opinion exists that country's technological advancement will negatively impact its inner traditions, so that it is not worth preserving them further. Although I am convinced that technological progress is of paramount importance for the country's future, maintaining its old traditions is much more crucial.
On the one hand, it is hard to underestimate the effect of the development in various technological areas on the country's future stability and income. Such vital areas as medicine and engineering are significantly based on scientific research as well as the usage of many mechanical tools and algorithms in their work. For instance, advancements in artificial intelligence and robotics assist surgeons in their everyday work, making this process much more precise and efficient. Overall, better medicinal care is beneficial for the whole society since the population may focus on their work rather than worrying about health-related issues.
On the other hand, traditions are an essential part of the family culture in every society. Strong family bonds guarantee a much more stable social environment which, in its turn, influences the economical stability of the state. Such an environment ensures that every member of society knows exactly their social role and aims. It means, for example, that unless there is no economical and personal support of family members on the youngsters, they will struggle to achieve their goals at school and subsequently in university so that the next generation of highly educated and essential professionals may be less numbered.
In conclusion, I strongly support that it is absolutely necessary for the country to be technologically advanced, however, maintaining its core traditions is much more important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ment which, in its turn, influences the economical stability of the state. Such an environ...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessary'.
Suggestion: necessary
...nclusion, I strongly support that it is absolutely necessary for the country to be technologically a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5704467354 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13970515995 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594501718213 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0014172131 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.083333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13226201683 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528250998 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526200697827 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916823289851 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664952283377 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.