All-inclusive stores offer a wide variety of services and products to their customers, this has negative effects on local business and establishments and they are forced to close down their business. Though the situation can cause some major drawback to the local community. The local community and governments could take some steps for damage control and support local business.
First of all, many of the small business and grocery stores owned and operated by people who live local and from the same community. There are many issues the community faces if a local business closes its door such as jobless citizens and cut down on their family income, no income means no tax for the government. On top of that, Eventually, these supermarkets chains will start to control everything. For example, In New Zealand, all the supermarkets are under the ownership of two major companies (Foodstuff NZ ltd and Woolworth Ltd ) as the market is monopolised by these companies they have the freedom and control over the market. Another example is when Reliance started its supermarkets they used to offer lots of discounts. Once they took over the market its all disappeared. Furthermore, local shops offer small credits to their customers as they know each other well. this has a huge help to the salaried professionals as they only need to settle the amounts when they get salaries or wages.
As a solution, Governments and communities could take several steps to mitigate the issue. In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as competing with supermarkets.
- In some countries many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
- People are becoming more and more sugar based drinks Why What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption 78
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies Do you agree or disagree 56
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Many small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area How does this affect local communities How could this situation be improved 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re forced to close down their business. Though the situation can cause some major draw...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'close'?
Suggestion: close
...the community faces if a local business closes its door such as jobless citizens and c...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anies Foodstuff NZ ltd and Woolworth Ltd as the market is monopolised by these co...
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Line 3, column 733, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s they used to offer lots of discounts. Once they took over the market its all disap...
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Line 3, column 879, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...customers as they know each other well. this has a huge help to the salaried profess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2480620155 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09152690583 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3413202122 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276542307155 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884672598074 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420810343873 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172536586749 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463427504243 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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