Water is a necessity for sustaining life on earth: However, due to human interactions, it becomes highly polluted. The adverse effects are unimaginable although, they could be reversible if we take some steps and implement them effectively before it's too late. The loss of aquatic biodiversity and adverse effect on the health of other creatures are two significant problems could arise. Also, this essay will outline solutions for these matters.
Due to the water contamination, living in some parts of the world has become uncomfortable and inhospitable for many creatures including human beings. Fishermen communities, for instance, are some of the people directly affected by the water quality. They have lost their livelihood because no aquatic animals or fish could not live in contaminated water. On top of that, polluted water sources compromised agriculture and forced farmers to seek other resources to compensate for it. The effect on our health is something that we cannot ignore. Nowadays, we are facing many health challenges due to the quality of drinking water.
There is no single solution to curb the matter: Moreover, a combined effort by governments and citizens is necessary to restate the water quality. A simple step is not to further contaminate our water sources, this could be achievable by not dumping hazardous materials and other pollutants into the water sources. Also, governments should implement some strict rules and regulations to prevent polluting the resources. On top of that, preventing waste materials from reaching rivers or canals is another way to prevents water contamination.
Without water, it will be impossible for us to live, and if we would not act now the effects will be unimaginable or Leeds the earth to become an inhabitable space for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28222996516 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94928748841 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4540480859 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232633648631 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732788543161 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567091411439 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126161952818 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654439597522 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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