In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In different nations around the glob people are in increasing very quickly which is leading us to unsuitable increase in first aid, individuals in every country should pay their health fee by their own. I am agree to the later view because it allow people to take their health responsibility and also in courage them to remain fit.i will discuss in details.
To begin with, paying medical fees by self keep everyone responsible for their self care, to explain it people who are buying care equipments are more careful inserted for whom government is paying. For instance ratio of different sickness was 57% in dubai when hospitals used to pay for patients, but it reduces to 1 third when officials announced is to be paid, who are coming for treatment. As result announcement of paying by self has worked a lot.
In addition, humans around the world will remain fit if they are payable their expenses of illness, furthermore working on physical fitness is always beneficial in many beating daises including blood pressure, sugar etc. For example china has recorded a very low amount of cases of BP and diabetes in last two year because chines health department has issue a law that people who weight over 70 kg will not be able to compete in any sports and will also not be able to use public transportation. Thus imposing of this law has safe many people of bing sick.
In conclusion, paying by self keeps everyone a wear of their well being and also keeps them physical fit. I am to the view that charging individual for health issues keeps them active in terms of illness.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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... am agree to the later view because it allow people to take their health responsibil...
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... and also in courage them to remain fit.i will discuss in details. To begin with...
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...ible for their self care, to explain it people who are buying care equipments are more...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... be paid, who are coming for treatment. As result announcement of paying by self h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, third, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70036101083 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53666566168 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610108303249 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.3746351342 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.2 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145160330138 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588997208608 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353998479106 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867707469953 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331158788202 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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