In many societies in the world, the population is aging rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that countries around the glob is dealing with rapid increase in population and it cost them rise in medical care price of people, while other think that people in every country should pay their health care fee in future. In my prospective government of nation’s should control over population and their diet to control first aid prices. I will discus in details.
To begin with, every country must look over to control their population, which will help state to develop their hospitals and will be able to provide good health facilities to their individuals. For example india has introduced a plan, which will help them succeed in getting rid of population problem, they had announced that nations citizen will only be able to give birth to only 2 babies and if someone is wishing to have third baby so their is a certain amount of tax they will pay this will control their of being over populated. As the result country is able to sarve their people.
Secondly, government must built fitness Centre's in every state to avoid illness, furthermore person with healthy and fit body is able to overcome many issues. For instance my mom wakes me up every morning for exercise in a ground near to my home, where sprint for 30 mints and also attend yoga class with my friends, in addition my mother also keeps me away from junk and oily food, these kind of activities keeps me away from health care points. Some times prevention is better than cure.
In conclusion, controlling population and development of fitness Centre's will help governments to over come this problem. In my view must go for more options which keep people taking their nation to this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78694158076 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39354911396 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573883161512 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.8509187222 49.4020404114 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.636363636 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6363636364 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161458825601 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630590684706 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486776481444 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110992015979 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547700171705 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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