Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is this positive or negative development

Essay topics:

Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. Is this positive or negative development

It is considered that majority marts prefer to selling foreigner items rather than local ones. I believe that it is constructive development because it enhance the standard of product quality and local bussiness men.
To commence with view, firstly foreigner food product provides high nutrition value. To explicate it, marts try to choose nourished products from allover worlds and encourage the masses to select rich diet for live healthy life. For epitome, W.H.O conduct a survey and revealed due to good ingredient 60% multitude start to give preority for purchasing foreigner items instead of local unhealthy food. Thus, super store sell healthy foods in comparison local street food.
Further strengthening view, develop healthy competition. To elaborate it, local businesses began to do efforts for improving their business by replacing cheapest items with quality products so, they can tackle competition. For instance, 'The Indian Express ' newspaper published a article of chairman of Indian Trade Association that In 2022, after arriving foreign products, Indian market has grown 50% up standard wise and income wise. As the result, foreign products also give contribution in growth of indian market.
To conclusion, foreign products are not only give healthy lives to community but also help to grow local market.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, then, thus, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6557591225 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7007353013 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165159425671 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708253969251 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469124787637 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106374457483 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520374466568 0.056905535591 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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