Many university graduates leave university facing uncertainty and unemployment. What are the causes and effects? Offer some solutions.
Nowadays, there are a number of universities graduates face with jobless. This essay will discuss main reasons and effects on the individual and society then lay out some possible solutions for this phenomenon.
There are various factors that cause unemployment and uncertain in graduate students. Perhaps the major reason is that those students have lack of skills and insufficient experience. This may mean that after leaving university they only have basic knowledge in work, so they could not abstract their employers at the first interview. Moreover, there are a huge number of students graduate in a particular field such as information technology or finance, resulting in a decrease in the demand for such position.
As a result, when unlucky graduated pupils have not capable to find a job, they will be unhappy about their lives, encouraging them to engage in anti-social activities. This leads them to become a part of criminal that influences their social.
Turning to possible solutions, there are some considerations that the government should be aware. Firstly, it is significant that education system should be improved to meet the demands for stakeholder requirements. In addition, universities make cooperation with relevant companies, so students have chances to broaden their knowledge as well as gain valuable experience through their internship. A consequence, those learners have adequate skills and quality resumes applying for a dream job. Furthermore, by exporting workforce to other countries, the government may not only reduce a large amount of unemployment, but it also increases safety in society.
In conclusion, leaving university after graduating, students will face unemployment that causes some disadvantage for individuals and society. Thus, the government should consider some solutions to reduce this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some solutions to reduce this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63571428571 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05774359919 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1741040788 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.2 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20403649042 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682700937808 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762944243177 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120912161124 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695167126239 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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