Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations.
There are many university students who choose to stay with their families, however, a huge amount ) of them are determined to start an independent life no matter how far their accommodations are. This essay will specifically illustrate benefits as well as drawbacks of both situations.
Staying at home for college students clearly offers several benefits. Generally, they do not have to pay for the accommodation’s cost such as dormitory on campus or rented apartment, which is definitely more expensive compared to their own home – as it’s available for them to stay and live. Not to mention that it is way more comfortable when they are able to come back home, meet all family members as well as eat some delicious homemade cuisine after a long hard-working day. However, the disadvantage of this situation is that some students have to go a long way to get home, which is probably hard to travel due to bad weather likely storms, doggy, windy. For example, when I return to home after finishing many lessons at school, not only am I received love and care from family members, or be into the cozy ambience, But I also do not have to spend a huge deal of money on paying for the accommodation’s prices because my parents have taken care of those expense.
Besides, living away from home for a college student is also considered to be a valid point. Independence from parents and families is widely accepted nowadays since this is a strong background for university students to know how to make their own living without relying too much on family’s support, at the same time, create opportunities to seek new job in order to gain work experience, which is believed will closely link to their maturity as well as their future development. For example, in some developed countries such as European nations, students who have already reached their 18 are strongly encouraged to feed themselves and live an independent life apart from families in order to boost development and endurability in society. But this also leads to homesickness, especially for those who have strong family bonds or never been away from their parents and brothers.
In conclusion, I perceive that staying at homes or living at schools away from their families for university students have many benefits as well as several drawbacks. Each and every should deeply perceive both situations mentioned above so that they are able to make the best decision for their student lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99033816425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90982910438 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9895944984 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.923076923 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8461538462 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297545594132 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117617447302 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735158816903 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209347043002 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566215019064 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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