Many university students live with their families, while other live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
These days, while it is fairly common for many college-goers to stay with their family, it is not unusual for them to reside near the university campus, due to long-distance from home. Although there are few benefits of living with parents, there are certain drawbacks as well. this essay will discuss both aspects below.
With the increasing population, new university campuses are coming up, which are usually situated away from the main town or cities, some even located in different regions. there are many students who prefer to reside at home. this has two major benefits. First of all, no extra money is needed to rent or live in other accommodation, thereby reducing the financial burden. Secondly, staying with the family is safer and comfortable. On the contrary, staying at home may restrict social interactions, which may lead to a lack of interpersonal communication and dependence on parents.
Considering the other aspect, living in hostels or lodges near the university campus has two main advantages. Firstly, it saves commuting time, which may lead to additional time which could be utilized in other productive work and projects. For example, one can learn music or play a game in their spare time. Furthermore, residing in the campus area among different students may lead to better interpersonal relationships. Consequently, it might result in better overall personal development. On the other hand, one important negative effect of independent living is the lack of emotional support provided by family, especially when one gets sick or depressed.
To conclude, there are both advantages and disadvantages for the students staying and home and others who stay away from home, for university education. The decision must be taken by the students themselves, what they prefer in this regard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, first of all, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28965517241 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91877558092 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8515287258 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349783373866 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869672923731 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743405470138 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208903333109 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447901972878 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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