Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
It is true that the question of which one between living with families and living independently has more benefits remains controversy. In my opinion, there are the advantages and disadvantages of both circumstances.
On the one hand, it is inevitable for university students to gain benefits from living with their parents. The first one could be that undergraduate students are more likely to be economical in many facets of life, particularly is accommodation. Those students who come from different provinces ,for instance, have to rent accommodation when entering to universities located in the urban center. As a result, province students are more likely to bear additional fee of accommodation in comparison with urban students.
Moreover, city students receive many supports from their family such as meals, utilitarian facilities in favor of doing chores and so on. Consequently, urban students do not have to think of what meals are made today, tomorrow, which force them to put all their effort into study and get high scores. By contrast, they will be disturbed by surroundings, especially at the weekend. Families intend to organize some activities at the weekend for all members. Family offspring can not avoid attending to those activities. Therefore, they can’t keep up with their study schedule.
On the other hand, there are many drawbacks for countryside students to come to big city for study. It is easy to recognize that rural undergraduates pay high cost of accommodation and experience a new environment in which everything is unfamiliar with them, thereby encounter many challenges and difficulties in their life that urban students never get exposed to before. Therefore, students from some small towns are more inclined to be mature. However, several province students have no difficulty on the study concentration and receive some fellow supports. As a result, these students are always top-notch ones in the class among a wide range of peers.
In conclusion, while there is a gap between two personal situations of individuals, some potential advantages and disadvantages of living home or away from home can be identified.
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...udents who come from different provinces ,for instance, have to rent accommodation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38416422287 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10964124622 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560117302053 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4095878104 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335195636384 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927266577195 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810250571955 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186148043443 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052036714718 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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