Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, it seems that more women are choosing to start a family later in life than ever before. Personally, I believe that there are both financial and social factors that account for this change, and I would argue that this change has much more advantages than disadvantages.
The opting of not having children early is especially preferred by most women all over the world for some reason. Firstly, it is undoubtedly necessary that both men and women have to earn living in order to make end needs. Before embarking on parenthood, they must take into account their financial ability in order to support the family. Secondly, in social terms, nowadays, as a result of the development in awareness of society in general as well as of women in particular about the equal rights between men and women, women have a tendency to be dependent on personal finance before having a family and children. This seems like a guarantee of them before entering the world of married.
I consider that the positive aspects of this trend outweigh the negatives ones. On the one hand, some negative factors still exist, such as many women would love to have children when they are still young because of a few personal reasons. Meanwhile, the explosion of the human population has led to many problems such as food scarcity or the lack of infrastructure. Besides, the later a woman embarking on parenthood, the more mature she is when making decisions. This will help reduce the percentage of families which end in divorce in particularly as well as the society’s vices in general.
In conclusion, for economic and social reasons many women are choosing to have children later in life. Despite the disadvantages, I believe that these are outweighed by the positive environmental consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97324414716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7681561258 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545150501672 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348563496396 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108481560564 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935482789083 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220786034426 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669211934727 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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