Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a widely-held view among people about whether physical strength is overshadowed by mental attitude for athletes in order to gain accomplishment in sports. From my point of view, I would argue that both these elements play an equally vital role in success.
On the one hand, it is no doubt true that athletes would only be considered to be athletes’ eligibility only if they meet certain required muscle strength. First, this would give them the ability to be at the peak of their condition, thereby facilitating outstanding performances. Second, without physical stamina, a sportsperson is unable to cope with the extremely intensive prolonged training, which is definitely a requisite part of playing sports. Therefore, no matter how talented they are in their fields, they would soon fall behind in comparison to others if they don’t practice regularly and boost their physical limitation.
On the other hand, strong mental toughness must be an indispensable factor attributing to success in sports. For instance, in a tense match, athletes who are in possession of an excellent mentality would be able to analyze the situation logically as well as to come up with brilliant strategies. In such cases, they could become perceptive of inconspicuous advantages which could likely not be conceived by those who are worried and anxious. Besides, if trainees cannot foster a competitive spirit, or even a win-at-all-costs attitude, they may be devoid of concentration and lost their determination after a few hours of practice.
In conclusion, both physical and mental strength are necessary to become successful in sport. Hence, neither should be overlooked nor taken lightly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10321719122 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4838489321 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156260663501 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658093155139 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829322955785 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121555416706 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713206979663 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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