Some people say the government should give healthcare the first priority, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the taxpayers’ money. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
There is a widely-held view among people about whether or not the citizens’ healthcare should be the government’s priority. While there has been a growing body of opinion in favor of putting more resources into other factors, I am of the opinion that we should concentrate our government’s budget on healthcare.
On the one hand, it is undoubtedly true that other factors like education, infrastructure and environmental protection have their undeniable value. For instance, education will act as a stimulus to illuminate people’s minds and thinking as well as broaden their horizons, leading to spurring technological advances and innovations, which is especially vital in light of the proliferation of technological advancements. As for infrastructure, well-designed ones will facilitate the flow of products and services, which is constructive for the country’s socio-economic development. Environment protection would secure to achieve sustainable development, which could prevent the environmental degradation not only for ourselves but also for the future.
On the other hand, healthcare is a crucial government investment to sustain economic growth and maintain social stability. People who are covered by government-funded and affordable health plans can be exempted from the enormous financial burdens of the feesthey have to pay when getting sick, thereby feeling more secure and less financially stressed. The healthier their mental and physical conditions are, the more valuable a contribution they can make on a societal level, ultimately stimulating economic development. In addition, this can help to raise the average life expectancy of residents, which acts as a precursor when evaluating the happiness index of countries worldwide.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be better if policymakers made it a top priority to provide the public with adequate and affordable medical resources and treatment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...s a widely-held view among people about whether or not the citizens’ healthcare should be the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74652777778 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47521919273 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642361111111 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.3597400762 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.454545455 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129367833116 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484048142718 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503997414515 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824371101273 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673442413407 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.