No matter in their working days or freetime, many people do little even no excercise. This unhealthy lifestyle is highly discussed with the reasons and solutions of it. From diet, slumber and habbits of these people, I will elaborate on my views as follows.
The reasons of lacking excercise among these people vary. Generally, time allocation comes first. When they are working, most of them with great working pressure have no time to excercise, busy with their missions all the day. After work, with a tired body, few of them would go to the gym anymore. When they are free, their time may be occupied with other schedules. For parents, most of the devote their time to their children in the weekend. As for the singles, the free time is full of parties, hanging out with friends.Additionally, some people eat a lot with less or no excercise, their health would be easily marred by obesity, which follwing with a series of disease like heart or liver issues. What's worse, some of them are so busy that they have not enough time to sleep, let alone doing excercise. That is another health killer in that only in sleep, our body could get fully recovered from the tiredness of yesterday.
How to deal with the problem caused by lacking excercise is another hot topic nowadays. As my concern, on weekdays, people can commute to work with bicycles if possible. At weekends, it is advised to go to gyms. Besides, eating healthily is significant to these people lacking of excercise. With less intaking grain and flours, eating more fish and vegetables will strength people's bodies. Last, sleeping well and keeping a good emotion are important to them.
In all, even the reasons of lacking excercise are various, people still have ways to do excercise and keep good fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, still, well, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83278688525 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53574287688 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3232770879 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5789473684 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52631578947 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276283874886 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787139524869 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763796753942 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155750095502 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603772976958 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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