MANY OF THE WORLD’S ARE CURRENTLY FACING A SERIOUS HOUSING SHORTAGE. WHAT ARE SOME OF THE REASONS FOR THIS SHORTAGE AND WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?
In this today's fast changing world, the citizens are having to deal with the grave housing shortage in several megacities. From my point of now, there are a myriad of contributors to this problem as well as the keys to address the lack of accommodation
To start with, the housing shortage can boil down to several factors. The first thing to notice is the alarming rate of overpopulation, especially in big cities. When the inflows of immigrants keep pouring into the inner city in search of better living standards, it strikes heavy burdens to the land and the government. Hardly can the government cater enough housing in a short amount of time with limited space, in turn, results in the lack of accommodation. Moreover, it is the speculation of wealth that deters ordinary home-buyers from owning a house. Take the situation in Ha Noi as an example, since buy-to-let properties of the investors have increased, the price of accommodations is inflated and soon become out of reach of normal people.
Without doubt, people will be deprived of the chances of getting a house with a reasonable price.
However, there are a multitude of solutions to deal with the lack of housing in cities. The thing worth considering is that the government can develop more cooperative planning to construct efficient houses. They can, to some extent, subsidize "social homes for poor people before erecting enough plats. or condos to be on sale. Furthermore, some greenbelt land or plots of land for recreational use including parks or stadiums can be removed to make room for building houses. Nevertheless, there should be higher taxes on the land properties to bring disincentives to buy-to-let buyers. For example, if they realize that they have to pay more taxes for a house with fewer interests, they will tend not to invest in real estates, meaning less exorbitant prices. This can be a precursor for ordinary people to house and purchase their own decent and reasonable accommodation.
In conclusion, the lack of housing can be attributable to an unprecedented level of overpopulation as well as the housing bubbles in the real estate market. On the bright side, this problem can be tackled with the aid of the government in ‘social housing’ and better city planning and the decrease in speculation through higher taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04922279793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94024103024 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531088082902 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5135852208 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.277777778 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206013010672 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622381812989 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553036093666 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110821873376 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373338054379 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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