Many young people decide to have baby later. Why? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Giving birth later of youthful couples has been receiving a great deal of public attention in recent years. Although this trend is not without pros, the downsides will justify these.
There are a whole host of reasons for this tendency in our society. First, since the competition in labor market enables young couples to focus more time as well as efforts on their careers than raising a family. In fact, the desire of high-quality standardised living requires the growing individuals to perform their work with a good commitment even long hours, which helps them accumulate a better income. Secondly, the majority of the youth realise that making the ultimate sacrifices for children's nurture would be required. For instance, it is more likely for inexperienced parents to spend not only patience but also hard work on feeding and teaching the kids.
There is no doubt that everything has both sides. For advantages, those who build their own family late would be accessible to enjoy a free lifestyle without children. Indeed, young adults have more time to do personal things or travel, as a result, they easily gain a higher level of happiness than those who do not. By contrast, giving birth later poses some risks that would have a major impact on a significant age gap between two generations. Furthermore, it might be harder to get pregnant when a female is over 35 years as well as the probability of birth defect would be higher.
In conclusion, although there are several benefits for young couples to have a baby later, it seems to me that they should start a family at an early age.
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- Today, many companies and businesses are involved in sports. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 67
- Many young people decide to have baby later. Why? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
- Many young people decide to have baby later. Why? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86446886447 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5831111219 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2353348148 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110658827801 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339141196893 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519891781499 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737226143374 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538606514838 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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